The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 year-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English Speaking country and the top three popular foreign languages. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart below displays the percentage of two genders who are around 25
school’s
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school
students
studied
a foreign Correct pronoun usage
who studied
language
at 14 to 16 years in an English speaking
country and the top three popular new Add a hyphen
English-speaking
language
their Change to a plural noun
languages
like
to study in 1984 and 2007.
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liked
Overall
, it is obvious that more girls have passion
to learn new languages than boys in all survey years. Add an article
a passion
the passion
Also
, French was the most popular language
that students
would like to study compared with another two languages.
In 1984, there were around 50 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
females
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female
students
learned
a foreign Correct pronoun usage
who learned
language
contracted with 30 percent
of males. After Change the spelling
per cent
that
all numbers decreased dramatically in 2007, 40 Add a comma
,that
percent
of girls studied Change the spelling
per cent
new
Correct article usage
a new
language
. In contrast
, approximately 25 percent
of boys study another Change the spelling
per cent
language
.
On the other hand
, the most famous language
for students
learning was French, reaching 50 percent
compared with 20 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
of German and under 10 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
of Spanish in 1984. In 2007, the figure Change the spelling
per cent
of
people who studied French declined suddenly, peakingChange preposition
for
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at
percent
and the percentage of Change the spelling
per cent
students
learned
German decreased low than 15 Correct pronoun usage
who learned
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, the number of Add an article
the person
a person
person
who learned Spanish Change to a plural noun
people
growth
to 10 Replace the word
grew
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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