You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart details
about
how many houses that are constructed in Change preposition
apply
derby
and Nottingham from the year 2000 to 2009
From an Correct your spelling
Derby
overall
perspective its
readily apparent that, there Replace the word
it's
it is
are
more Change the verb form
is
number of
houses in 2009 than Correct quantifier usage
apply
previous
years in both Change preposition
in previous
the
cities . Derby outnumberedCorrect article usage
apply
Change the capitalization
Nottingham
nottingham
Change the capitalization
Nottingham
at the end
of 2009Submitted by deekshakode95 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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