The Following chart show five different industries percentage share of France's economy in 2000, 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relvant.

The Following chart show five different industries percentage share of France's economy in 2000, 2010 and 2020. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relvant.
The bar graph depicts the actual shares of the French recession held by five major business sectors in 2000, 2010, and 2020. Of the five sectors, banking had the most growth, with a 30% market contribution in 2000, 35% in 2010, and just over 40% in 2020.
In contrast
, the automotive sector’s contribution decreased over the years, from 20% in 2000 to 5% in 2020. The IT Service Industry, which accounted for about 10% of the economy in 2000, grew in 2010 but declined back to its original level in 2020 at 10%.
Similarly
, tourism grew by 5% between 2000 and 2010 but
then
shrank to its original 25% by 2020. The Energy sector, which was booming in 2000 with a percentage of around 25%, dropped slightly by 5% and remained at the same level in the
last
decade. In summary, for the period, banking accounted for the biggest part of France’s recession, with steady growth from 2000 to 2020,
while
the automotive industry accounted for the smallest stake in the economy, experiencing a steady decline throughout the period.
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