The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The supplied chart represents the top ten countries appropriate for the manufacture and utilization of
electricity
in 2014.
Overall
, China experienced the highest production and consumption of electricity
, while
both usage and production in Korea were limited.
Turning to the details of the bar chart, at 5,389 and 5,322 China generated and used more electricity
than any other country. The United States was the second largest producer and consumer at 4,009 and 3,866 billion kWh respectively. Among ,countries Russia was the only one whose output and consumption consisted of over 1,000 billion kWh (1,057 and 1,038). Korea comes as the lowest, with 485.1 and 449.5 of electricity
use and generation.
Getting back to the details, in terms of Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, GermanySubmitted by shams.aliyeva
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