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The graph below shows the amount of UK investments in clean energy from 2008 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of UK investments in clean energy from 2008 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 column chart illustrates the annual growth of the UK invested
money
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on
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 Renewal
Energies
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 between 2008 and 2015. It can be seen that many of the UK investments tend to gradually increase and the main trend it is more
money
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spend
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 on Wind
energy
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. In general, clean
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energies
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energy
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 investments are almost 4 times bigger during 2015 compared to 2008. Going more into detail, wind
energy
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 is the one
recieving
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receiving
 more funding from the government reaching almost 10
billon
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billion
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 dollars during the
last
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 year. In 2011 there was a significant drop of 2 billion dollars
on
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 wind
energy
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.
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on
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 the same year, there was a 4 billion investment in solar
energy
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 and another 3
billons
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billions
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 invested in other clean
energies
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. From 2008 until 2015, the
money
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spend
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spent
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 on
Energy
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 smart technologies has gradually increased over the years without overreaching 1 billion investment.
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, during almost a decade, the Uk government has gradually increased the amount of annual
money
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 invested
on
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 renewal
energies
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, energies, energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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