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Some people think we need more female leaders to create world peace and reduce violence.

#people #leaders #world #peace #violence
There is no room for doubt that in
this
 contemporary society,
gender
 plays an important role in shaping most of our aspects. Indeed, one topic that, to an extent, has raised worldwide controversy is whether or not
women
 should become
leaders
 or not. I totally disagree with
this
 statement because I think
gender
 is not a factor in ruling the
country
 and female
leaders
 may cause more problems than males. First and foremost, it is seen that
gender
 actually doesn’t affect any
country
's work.
Firstly
, ruling or sustaining a
country
 needs land, power, and money. Clearly, all the
leaders
 around the world try to fight for their
country
's peace and protect residents. In special cases, others try to dominate
other land
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 to benefit from it.
Secondly
, it is witnessed that some
leader
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women
 in history have been even more aggressive than men.
Women
also
 have impulse war like a man, which both were under the control of
country
 rule or its federal.
For instance
,
Women
 like Queen Elizabeth or Cleopatra used to start a war which
affect
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 hardly
to
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balance between countries.
Consequently
, a man or a woman can’t make their own decision but be controlled by power and prestige. On the one hand, females can make more mistakes even in jobs or other life missions if they are in high positions.
Firstly
,
women
 tend to be emotional, not rational. Clearly, to be a leader, people must have a tough mind against the provoke of other
leaders
 or unforeseen situations, in which
women
 may make an error
while
 facing it.
Therefore
, catastrophic consequences may happen if
women
 don’t keep their emotions.
Secondly
, there is an inherent role in which
women
 need to take care family and raise children, which appear the question of whether will they both manage nurturing children and leading a
country
. The result will be in crisis if they fail one of the big two missions. In conclusion,
gender
 isn’t a specific thing to become a leader and females may make more mistakes
while
 they are in the high position
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