The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart is an illustration of the
amount
of budget was
used weekly by families in one country in 1968 and in 2018.
From an Unnecessary verb
apply
overall
perspective, it can be seen that the highest amount
of money was spent on food while
both
fuel and power and personal good have the same least amount
. Moreover
, there was a similar trend of
Change preposition
in
both
two years in household goods
.
In 1968, people spent most of their income in
the consumption of food, accounting for 35 Change preposition
on
percent
, which is Change the spelling
per cent
higher
Correct article usage
a higher
amount
rather than other types of expenditure.Generally, there is a significant difference between
in Change preposition
apply
the
spending on food between 1968 and 2018. The families do not Correct article usage
apply
spent
a lot of money on fuel and power which stands the least rates of spending Change the verb form
spend
amount
.
The comparison between the expenditure of both
leisure and housing in 1968 and 2018, the more money was spent on both
in 2018, amounting to nearly 25 percent
and almost 20 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in turn Change the spelling
per cent
while
the same amount
of weekly budget spend
on three consumer Add a missing verb
was spend
goods
namely household goods
, personal goods
and transport, with over 5 percent
respectively in 1968.Change the spelling
per cent
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