The line graph indicated the information about the number of questionnaires collected from Tourist Information office in a city based on individual, letter/email and telephone by first 6 months in 2011.

The line graph indicated the information about the number of questionnaires collected from Tourist Information office in a city based on individual, letter/email and telephone by first 6 months in 2011.
The bar graph shows the information about the number of people who made questions collected from the tourist information office in a particular urban based in person, letter/ email and telephone from January to June in the year of 2011.
Overall
. with the exception of letter/email, There are great improvements in the other two methods after April massively. Regarding the individual, it started with the least chosen method in April which was 410
times
,
Although
, it sharply increased every month, at the
last
, it reached 1900
times
in June and was the most popular amongst these sections.
In contrast
, letters/emails had the opposite effect on the individual. It almost remained the same from January to March just under 800 to 700
times
. And dramatically lost points to 400 and settled in June. Looking at the telephone,
while
it fluctuated at the very beginning of the year, it managed to expand
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large amount of numbers from 1000 to 1600
times
respectively.
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