The line graph indicated the information about the number of questionnaires collected from Tourist Information office in a city based on individual, letter/email and telephone by first 6 months in 2011.
The bar graph shows the information about the number of people who made questions collected from the tourist information office in a particular urban based in person, letter/ email and telephone from January to June in the year of 2011.
large amount of numbers from 1000 to 1600
Overall
. with the exception of letter/email, There are great improvements in the other two methods after April massively.
Regarding the individual, it started with the least chosen method in April which was 410 Linking Words
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, it sharply increased every month, at the Linking Words
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, it reached 1900 Linking Words
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in June and was the most popular amongst these sections. Use synonyms
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, letters/emails had the opposite effect on the individual. It almost remained the same from January to March just under 800 to 700 Linking Words
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And dramatically lost points to 400 and settled in June.
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