The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries (France, Spain, Germany, Turkey) from 1970 to 2010.

The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries (France, Spain, Germany, Turkey) from 1970 to 2010.
The given line graph depicts some information about
fruit
production in four different countries namely France, Spain, Germany and Turkey during the 40-year period from 1970.
Overall
, as can be ostensibly seen, the production of
fruit
in given years in Spain and Germany has a downward trend. Meanwhile, at the same
time
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France and Turkey are experiencing an upward trend in their amount of
fruit
production.
Initially
, Spain's graph experienced a slight increase in the first decade and reaches a peak at roughly 6
while
after the 1980's the amount is dropping gradually and hit nearly 5 in 2010. In Germany during the same period even though the graph is reducing minimally but the proportion of
fruit
reaches the lowest point in 1990 with approximately 1.5. Turkey has a gradual increase starting at 2 and peaking at almost 3.5 during these years
while
on the other hand
in
France
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there is a fluctuation between 1990 and 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fruit with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • produce
  • trends
  • decrease/increase
  • production
  • peak
  • fluctuation
  • stability
  • volatility
  • significant
  • milestone
  • conjecture
  • harvest
  • agricultural
  • yield
  • decade
  • data representation
  • timespan
  • graph analysis
  • comparative
  • rankings
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