The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. W. a report for a university. lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. W. a report for a university. lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
The supplied graph showcases how much
did
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bananas
cost
in nations,
such
as Japan, France, Germany,
the
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and the
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USA, over a decade between 1994 and 2004.
Overall
, throughout the 10-year
period
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the price of a kilogram of
the
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fruit has
been
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fluctuated in all countries, even though all positions
at the end
remained the same as they were at the onset. As can be seen from the illustration,in 1994 Japan appeared to be the country which accounted for the largest
cost
with almost 2
dollars
, whilst, the least amount of money that might have been spent for a kilogram of bananas was noticed in the US(approximately 0.9$). Afterwards, expenditure
for
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the
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fruit hit a peak of roughly three
dollars
per kilo which was followed by a
considrable
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considerable
drop and a period of stability until 1998. Meanwhile, at the same given
time
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the situation in the United States demonstrated a
shotr
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short
growth and a plateau with
an
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insignificant palpitations.
Subsequently
, the
cost
for bananas levelled off at the figure of just over a dollar in America,
while
oscillations have been
occured
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occurred
in Japan until the end where the price
regarded
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as exactly 2.5 $. It could be noticed that the difference between Germany and France was inconsiderable, and the pattern remained in 2004,
although
there appeared waves with a following steadiness in the amount of money spent by
german
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German
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habitants,
however
, the
cost
witnessed the absence of neither significant growth or collapse, so, it was between one and 1.5
dollars
.
Nevertheless
, French residents' expenses per
a
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kilogram
unchanged
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were unchanged
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until 1997,
thereafter
, considerable vacillations with the bottom of a dollar in 2003 were experienced and
at the
end
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the price seemed to be just over one and half US
dollars
.
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