The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The graph illustrates how UK adolescents tended to be on a vegetarian
diet
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for 6 decades. It seems that, through the past sixty years, there has been significant variation among young people in the UK. Between 1960 to 1980, the number of adolescents tending to a vegetarian
diet
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increased steeply. after, one of the most significant rates was in 1980 when the trend of a vegetarian
diet
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peaked at more than 15 per
cent
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.
thereafter
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, the number of young people following the vegetarianism approach fell dramatically by about 7 per
cent
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. From 1993 to 2000, the rate fluctuated around 5 per
cent
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, but the lowest point of vegetarianism was before 2000 when the vegetarian trend reached approximately 2 per
cent
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. In the following, between 2000 to 2013, the number of adolescents who were persuaded to
diet
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vegetables
instead
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of meat rose slightly. Since
then
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, the percentage of UK young vegetarianism has remained at 10 per
cent
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words diet, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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