You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the Head of Department to change your course. In your letter, explain: what course you are doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Tom Smith, I am writing

this

letter to request you to change my

course

which I am doing now.

First,

I am doing a project management

course

in college but I am not interested in

this

course

because I belonged from an engineering background so, I am looking for something in my field.

Secondly

, the main reason for shifting the

course

is my lack of interest in the business field but surprisingly, I love machines more than anything,

due to

lack of feeling and emotion in

this

field I want to make up my mind to change the subjects. At

last

, I really happy if I get advanced programming in mechanics because I am looking for

this

course

for so long, luckily it is available in our college. The arrangements of faculty and updated equipment always inspired me to continue my studies in that

course

. I am looking forward to your update . Yours sincerely, Harpreet Singh

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