You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months -say how your work could be done while you are away -ask for his-her help in arranging it

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Dear Manager I am writing

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letter in regards to avail the opportunity of working in training and development department of our company in its

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. I recently completed my 6 years in Apex as a Human Resources Manager and now I want to improve my skills as an Administrative Manager. The

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of our company announced that it is starting

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training program for its HR employees and after the successful completion of

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training, the employees would be able to work in the

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as Administrative Managers for 5 months. It is an incredible opportunity for me, and I would like to relocate to the

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of Apex for 6 months. I know, the

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is in another country Canada, but I have visited the country so many times, and know its atmosphere and people really well. I am sure I would be able to adjust

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the new work environment and I am excited to develop my personal skills and expertise.

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, I want to mention that, I will be completely available in terms of contact through phone or

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meetings. I would like to ask you for your help to arrange my relocation. I will be extremely thankful to you and promise you that my skills and expertise would be a valuable contribution towards the company in the future.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

229 words

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