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The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The picture gives information about the transformation of a village named Youngsville in New Zealand from 1980 to 2005. It can be clearly seen that the northern
area
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 experienced a significant change around the lake. There was
also
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 a remarkable transformation in the south corner of the map as
this
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area
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 was turned into an industrial zone. To the north of the map, there was a hospital in the northwest
area
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 of the lake, surrounded by many trees, and a residential
area
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 situated to the northeast corner in 1980. In 2005 witnessed dramatic changes in
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area
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 as many trees were chopped down to make way for a new park.
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, the residential
area
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 was replaced by a brand-new stadium and a parking zone. In the south
area
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 of
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 village in 1980, there was a school in the southwest corner,
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 some houses and an airport. To the southeast
area
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, there was a row of buildings and a railway. In 2005, the village witnessed many remarkable changes. The school and airport were still unchanged, but the centre of
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area
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 was converted into an industrial zone with many factories and warehouses. The residential buildings were substituted by two new skyscrapers. The railway was expanded to the northern
area
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 and a new Marina was constructed right at the mouth of the river to the sea.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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