IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

you should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant You do NOT need to write any addresses

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Dear Sir, I am a member of an organisation which meets regularly at your
restaurant
. Yesterday I had dinner with my family for
anniversary
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the anniversary
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2
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of 2
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years wedding at your
restaurant
 so I am writing
this
 letter to send you
somethings
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something
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that make
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make
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makes
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 me uncomfortable
in
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at
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this
 time. I really love your
restaurant
 as the food here
are
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is
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 very
delicous
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delicious
 and all staff
alway
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always
 take care of
customer
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the customer
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. But yesterday
while
 we had
meal
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a meal
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, your staff turned on
music
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the music
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 very loud, so noisy, we could not
talking
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talk
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 together,
therefore
 I had not a nice meal. After dinner, I told
with
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apply
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your staff,
whom
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who
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 was turned on music about the problem but he does not care about it, he just smile and
leaved
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left
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. When I send
this
troulbe
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trouble
, I hope your
restaurant
 will
be change
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change
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 the time for turn on music or lower volume min
please
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,please
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. On Saturday next
week
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,week
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 my class will have
meeting
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a meeting
the meeting
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 at your
restaurant
 for lunch, so I hope everything will be better
more
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apply
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than
last
 time. Thank and I look forward to your response. Faithfully. Cindy.
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