you should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant You do NOT need to write any addresses

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Dear Sir, I am a member of an organisation which meets regularly at your

restaurant

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. Yesterday I had dinner with my family for

anniversary

Correct article usage

the anniversary

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of 2

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years wedding at your

restaurant

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so I am writing

this

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letter to send you

somethings

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something

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Correct pronoun usage

that make

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make

Correct subject-verb agreement

makes

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me uncomfortable

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this

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time. I really love your

restaurant

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as the food here

are

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very

delicous

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delicious

and all staff

alway

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always

take care of

customer

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the customer

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. But yesterday

while

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we had

meal

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a meal

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, your staff turned on

music

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the music

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very loud, so noisy, we could not

talking

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talk

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together,

therefore

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I had not a nice meal. After dinner, I told

with

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apply

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your staff,

whom

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who

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was turned on music about the problem but he does not care about it, he just smile and

leaved

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left

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. When I send

this

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troulbe

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trouble

, I hope your

restaurant

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will

be change

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change

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the time for turn on music or lower volume min

please

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,please

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. On Saturday next

week

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,week

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my class will have

meeting

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a meeting

the meeting

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at your

restaurant

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for lunch, so I hope everything will be better

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apply

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than

last

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time. Thank and I look forward to your response. Faithfully. Cindy.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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