You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: - Introduce yourself - Explain what experience and special skills you have - Explain why you are interested in.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the part-time shop-keeper job in your Museum which was posted on ABC News

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week. My name is Maria Do, 21 years of age,and a third-year student in the international economy department at Queen’s University. My hometown is in the countryside, and I intend to stay in the city during

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summer break. During the past three years, I have worked as a cashier in a mini supermarket and a salesperson in a mall, I,

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, have gained some communication skills to deal with all kinds of customers.

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, I can speak fluently English, Mandarin and a little bit of French, which I think I can handle international tourists. The reason I apply for

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position is that I would like to gain more practical experience before I graduate.

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, my family is not financially affluent, so I want to earn some money to pay for my final year’s tuition fees. I enclose my resume and look forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully, Maria Do

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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