"You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant "

Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the poor quality of meals that were served in your restaurant on our previous visit. As you know, my colleagues and I frequently meet in your restaurant, but we were disappointed with the food and service we received at
this
time. We thought of trying a new
dish
and order chicken pasta. There was a new member of our team, and she was excited to try it but after eating the first bite we realized that there was excessive salt and the chicken was not fresh. I informed the waiter, and he replaced the
dish
but unfortunately, the new
dish
still had the same taste as the previous one, but the waiter refused to take it back and started arguing with us. I hope you can settle
this
matter by checking carefully the quality
dish
before serving and making
surethe
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sure the
sure
the staff behave
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in
a polite and welcoming manner to the customers. I trust
this
problem will improve. Only
then
are we
concern
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to come back to your restaurant. Yours sincerely, Krystal
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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