The chart below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selelcting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavant.
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The bar graphs depict the information about the destination of UK graduates and postgraduates who completed their studies but do not do full-time work in 2008.
Overall
, the maximum number of students took their further
education, whereas
the minimum participated in voluntary work.
To begin
with, 29,665 graduates had interest
to do education continuously, whilst postgraduates accounted for 2,725. A difference was seen in 3,155 tutees in both bar charts who perform voluntary work in their society after Correct article usage
an interest
done
their study.
Moving onto Unnecessary verb
apply
further
information, 2,535 postgraduate learners participated part-time for earning money for their daily needs, while
it increased by 15,200 students in graduate
field. Add an article
the graduate
Lastly
, 16,235 graduate students do not do any type of they have become jobless and 1,625 postgraduates.Submitted by deepikanayyar1996
on
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