The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cemen-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building puroses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cemen-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building puroses.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the steps and equipment that are used in the process of cement-making and the way that
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product is used for
constructing
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, the process is not cyclic and is man-made. It's composed of several stages and the final product is
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used for concrete manufacture. The first step of
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fabrication is putting limestone and clay into a crusher that crushes them into powder.
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reduced mass is
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going through a mixer and rotating heater
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rotating. After that, the outcome runs through a grinder and becomes the final product: cement. The final step is packaging in bags and getting ready for the market. Cement is utilized in a mixture for building construction in a portion of 15%
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water (10%) and after that sand and little stones are added (25% and 50% respectively.
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fusion is
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rotated in a concrete mixer and it's ready to be used
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