✅ Q: Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many individuals argue that toddlers should rely on their
traditions
while
others believe that they should live liberty as they want.In my opinion, youngsters' live freedom is more vitally important rather than upholding tradition. Some
people
think that upholding
traditions
bring
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more amazing and enjoyable feelings
rather
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than social media.Because traditional holidays are important for the growth young population. If toddlers want to join
such
as
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traditional festivals, first thing first their thoughts change the best side.
For instance
, as for traditional
carnival
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carnivals
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, my country
is available
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a number of festivals of them are
that
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Navruz.
This
Carnaval is more vitally important for our hometown
,
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because
this
party everything traditional things
such
as clothes and meals, so many young
people
are keen on
this
holiday. On the one hand, I believe that if adolescents
should
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follow any
traditions
, they cannot create
future
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life for themselves.
This
is because they always use traditional methods for every situation, resulting in youngsters relying on
traditions
and losing thought
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,work and
also
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life.If they are choosing
this
way that more believe
traditions
, our world never change.
For instance
, any other countries
people
don't realize the demand for development noticeably
decrease
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.
Furthermore
, some young
people
always control what they eat and what they wear. Because they are compulsory to wear traditional clothing.
This
can lead to them losing capabilities.
Thus
it seems so tedious in their life. In conclusion,
although
this
trend
is providing
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a number of benefits, in my view the problems of
this
trend
more
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are more
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than the benefits.
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