The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second charts shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when relevant.
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The
first
pie chart illustrates the amount of energy
used in an average Australian household
while
the second one demonstrates the percentage of greenhouse
gas
emissions
.
First
of all, heating energy
is significantly used in Australian households whereas
gas
emission for water heating is the greatest percentage of Australian household
greenhouse
. On the opposite, cooling is the least amount of using energy
in the household
. In addition
, the mass of energy
apply for cooling and the amount of greenhouse
gas
emissions
which result from this
energy
use is almost the same. In the first
chart, the total energy
needed for refrigeration is 7 % which is twice in greenhouse
gas
emissions
. At the same time, energy
consumption for lighting is two-time the rise in gas
emissions
. According to
the first
picture, energy
for heating makes up half of household
energy
use. Energy
for other appliances considerably increased and it stands as an upward trend. On the contrary
, the Energy
used for heating is substantially by 27 % decreased .
All in all, energy
using household
affects greenhouse
gas
emissions
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