Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

Dear
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head teacher, I am writing to inquire about the fact that I heard that you need to find guardians who can travel with a group on a school tour to another country for three days. I agree with your opinion and
also
I would like to enjoy
this
trip with my child.
Firstly
, I would like to mention that I have already cleared my assignment
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I have free time to go with young people.
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, I have worked hard for a long time whenever l have a chance. I hope to spend
this
trip with a good family relationship.
Consequently
, I want to make myself confident about
activities
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of the school which are going to develop students in the future. If you want a driver, I can be a good driver. Not only can I cook Thai food but
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I have some
experiences
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as a guide in the forest trails. I would like to help you with whatever you need. I have some questions to ask you about the essential things that I must prepare and many participants will join the school tour.
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sincerely
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