Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

Dear Mrs Smith, I am writing

regrading

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the upcoming school

trip

at

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to

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Japan

in

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from

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15 July to 17 July.

According to

what John, my son said to me

that

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you wanted

a volunteer parents

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volunteer parents

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to join

with

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apply

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. I would be grateful if you put me in the group. Japan is the most popular country that

have

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so many fun activities for

kid

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kids

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so I totally agree with you

to arrange

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the field

trip

in order to make children understand cultural diversity.

This

why

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I want to become one of the parents to go and help

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the teacher

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teacher

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teachers

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to teach them.

Moreover

, I can speak

Japanese

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the Japanese

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language

quiet

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quite

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fluency

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because I

have

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studied there for 3 years when I was in high school.

Therefore

, I will be helpful during the

trip

and

also

can suggest you to

the

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good restaurants and

hotel

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hotels

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too.

However

, I would like to ask if you want me to

contract

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contact

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my friend who now

run

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the

5 star

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hotel to give a discount.

There

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have a view of Fuji mountain and

near

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are near

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the historical site that you plan to go

.

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to.

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If you have any

question

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or want more information about the hotel, don’t hesitate to contact me via [email protected]. I can’t wait to join the

trip

! I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Your

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sincerely, Laksika