Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Mr. Alan,
I am writing
this
letter to inquire about participating in the school trip to Thailand next month.
Let me explain in more details
. Fix the agreement mistake
detail
According to
the parent meeting which we discussed last
week, school
need some parents who are able to go with the group, and I would like to be the one who will have the opportunity to get great experiences with their kids abroad. Another reason that I am very well come to join the trip, is because my child is allergic Add an article
the school
in
some kinds of food; Change preposition
to
such
as peanuts and gluten. So I will appreciate it if I can look-after
him closely.
Correct your spelling
look after
In addition
, I had
been working at a child Wrong verb form
have
center
, so I do have some skills in taking care of children, and I am an expert in child Change the spelling
centre
behaviors
and have experiences to handle in their needs.
As it was mentioned Change the spelling
behaviours
in
the bottom of the document which I got from the meeting, I would like more information about the accommodation and transportation during the trip that I Change preposition
at
am really concern
it will be affected Change the verb form
am really concerned
from
Change preposition
by
hot
season in Thailand when we Add an article
a hot
the hot
have arrived
there.
If you require any Wrong verb form
arrive
further
information, please do not hesitate to cantact
me.
Correct your spelling
contact
Your
sincerely,
Kobkarn AriyaburootCorrect the word
Yours
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a separate main idea to maintain clarity and organization.
task achievement
Briefly check for minor grammatical errors or typos that can occasionally distract, although they don't significantly impair communication.
task achievement
You've effectively communicated your reason for wanting to join the trip, focusing on your child's needs and your capability to assist.
coherence cohesion
Your closing and sign-off are appropriately formal, matching the tone expected in letter writing.
coherence cohesion
It's clear you've segmented the letter into paragraphs, each with a distinct purpose, which is great for readability.