You have been teaching English in Vietnam. Your contract with the university is to terminate and you want to continue teaching in Ho Chi Minh City. Write to a university to seek a position. In your letter: - Introduce yourself - Explain what experience and special skills you have - Explain why you are interested in the job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to seek a job opportunity in your institution. My name is Maria Do, 30 years of age, female, single and a Canadian. I got a Master's degree in sociology at Queen’s University. I have been living in Hochiminh City for the

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three years teaching Academic English at the International School of Business. Before teaching in Vietnam, I used to be a sociologic teacher at a high school in Canada. During eight years of teaching and with my major, I have gained some important skills

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as problem-solving skills and communication skills that I believe I can work well with students and other fellow teachers. I am interested in the position of conversational English teacher at your institution because I am always passionate about a teaching career, and as English is my first language, I would like to convey the beauty and delicacy of

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language to Vietnamese students.

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, as know your university is one of the prestigious schools in Vietnam, I would like to find a permanent job so that I can stay in

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charming country longer. I enclose my resume for your convenience. Should you feel favourably with my application, kindly grant me an interview. Yours faithfully, Maria Do

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task response

Ensure to address the specific job position you are seeking in the opening paragraph.

coherence and cohesion

Maintain a consistent flow of ideas and information throughout the letter, linking sentences and paragraphs effectively.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

211 words

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