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The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of five energy storages in gigawatts in 2015 and a
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comparison
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 for 2040.
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, the most notable trend is that fossil fuels will still dominate the amount of energy capacity in future,
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 most other resources have a considerable increase. Looking at the details, in 2015, there was
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 highest storage in patrols, which was around two third gigawatts. Meanwhile, there has a quarter of other renewables
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 the total amount of energy in wind, nuclear and solar contained only 13 per
cent
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 GW.
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, in 2040, there is a projection that these three groups will have significant growth with a dominant more than one-third.
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, there is a higher development in solar power which will rise 16 per
cent
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.
By contrast
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, we can see that there is a
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shrinkage
 of predictions in fossil fuels and wind, with 20 per
cent
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 and 2 per
cent
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 decline respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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