The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar
graph
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illustrates how many male and female students were present in the evening coaching centre in 2009,
however
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, the image of the pie
graph
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tells us about the ages of the individuals who were attending those classes. The first
graph
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has shown that most of the men were interested in painting, as there were 30 male students in
class
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,
whereas
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, the majority of the women candidates, which were 40 in number, were interested in learning a new language.
Conversely
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, both genders showed the least interest in sculpture, as 10 people were in men's
class
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and even less than that in women's.
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, there were only 10 male students in drama
class
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as well, but the female section of the drama
class
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had about 20 ladies. The second
graph
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has shown that on the one hand, people under the age of 20, were probably too caught up in other activities to attend afternoon sessions, so their percentage is only 5%.
On the other hand
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, individuals above 50 had plenty of time to fill their evenings with these classes, so people over 50 have the maximum proportion of 42%.
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