The chart illustrates the number of people from history museums, British museums, national museums and science museums who visoverall, the highest number of people visited British.
The chart illustrates the
number
of people
from history
museums
, British
museums
, national museums
and science
museums
who visoverall, the highest number
of people
visited British
.
overall
, the highest number
of people
visited British
museums
compared to other fields while
National museums
account for the lowest proportion in July. Furthermore
in the chart, the number
of people
who visited 4 categories: History
museums
, British
museums
, national museums
and science
museums
tends to increase. Regarding June, the number
of people
who visited the Science
Museum
accounted for the highest proportion was 440000 people
. sequent British
museums
there are 430000 people
to visit. History
museums
there are 410000 people
to visit. while
national museums
accounted for the lowest proportion was 200,000 people
. In the next 3 months: July, August and 9 trend oscillations. Specifically, the first 2 months of the year the museum
science
was stable.In particular
, the number
of visitors to the British
Museum
peaked at 720,000. In October, the history
museum
was reduced to 260,000 people
. The British
Museum
plummeted to just 440,000 people
. The National Museum
decreased slightly to 190000 visitors. Science
museums
range from 50,000 to 300,000.Submitted by joyce.ta213 on
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