The given chart expresses the percentage of 3 groups of people ate 5 servings of fruit and vegetables daily in the United Kingdom over the period of 8 years.

The given chart expresses the percentage of 3

groups

of

people

ate

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5 servings of fruit and vegetables daily in the United Kingdom over the period of 8 years. In general, the proportion of fruit and

vegetables

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vegetable

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consumption

of

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by

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women

was the highest in

3

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the 3

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groups

,

whereas

figure

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the figure

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for

children

accounted for the lowest ratio.

Furthermore

, there was a dramatic increase in

rate

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the rate

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of all

groups

of

people

consuming these food items over the given period. In 2001, the rate of

children

,

men

and

women

who absorbed 5 portions of fruit and vegetables was 13%, 17% and 21%, respectively. In the next 2 years, the

figure

for

children

and

men

remained steady

while

the proportion of

women

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women's

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consumption saw an upward trend. There was a growing tendency in all

groups

of

people

over the time till 2006, the

figure

for

men

and

women

hit the highest point of 27% and 35%, respectively

while

the ratio of

women

eating food servings went down by 33% and the

figure

for

men

remained stable in 2007. In 2008, a slight fall was seen in whole 3

groups

of

people

.

However

, the

figure

for

women

accounted for the largest rate at 30% in

groups

of

people

while

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the figure

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for

men

and

children

was 26% and 24%, respectively.