The given chart expresses the percentage of 3 groups of people ate 5 servings of fruit and vegetables daily in the United Kingdom over the period of 8 years.
The given chart expresses the percentage of 3
groups
of Use synonyms
people
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ate
5 servings of fruit and vegetables daily in the United Kingdom over the period of 8 years.
In general, the proportion of fruit and Correct pronoun usage
who ate
vegetables
consumption Change the noun form
vegetable
of
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by
women
was the highest inUse synonyms
3
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the 3
groups
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whereas
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figure
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the figure
children
accounted for the lowest ratio. Use synonyms
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the rate
groups
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people
consuming these food items over the given period.
In 2001, the rate of Use synonyms
children
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men
and Use synonyms
women
who absorbed 5 portions of fruit and vegetables was 13%, 17% and 21%, respectively. In the next 2 years, the Use synonyms
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children
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men
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while
the proportion of Linking Words
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women
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women's
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people
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men
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women
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while
the ratio of Linking Words
women
eating food servings went down by 33% and the Use synonyms
figure
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men
remained stable in 2007. In 2008, a slight fall was seen in whole 3 Use synonyms
groups
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people
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However
, the Linking Words
figure
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women
accounted for the largest rate at 30% in Use synonyms
groups
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people
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while
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figure
for Add an article
the figure
men
and Use synonyms
children
was 26% and 24%, respectively.Use synonyms
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