The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.

The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
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The table provides information about the workforce in
silk
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production, in two countries, England and Wales, over a
period
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of 50
years
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, starting from 1851.
It is clear that
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the total
number
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of
silk
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workers in the two countries fell over the
period
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, and that significantly more women were employed than men in
this
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industry.
Also
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, the
number
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of
silk
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manufacturing factories increased over the 50
years
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period
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, despite some fluctuations. In 1851, the
silk
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workforce was at its peak, with 130,750 employees, including 76,786 females and approximately 54,000 males.
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, the
number
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of
silk
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plants was at its lowest in 1851, at only 272.
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, ten
years
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later, the
number
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of
silk
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factories had almost tripled, reaching 761,
while
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the total
number
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of employees experienced a considerable fall of over 20,000 people. Over the following 40
years
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, the total
number
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of female and male workers gradually decreased throughout the
period
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, to 25,567 and 13,375 respectively, which resulted in a drop in the total
number
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of employees, at 38,942 in 1901. Meanwhile, the
number
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of
silk
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factories experienced a slow down decline over these 40
years
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, from 761 in 1861 to 623 in 1901.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words silk, period, years, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Industrial expansion
  • Manufacturing hub
  • Technological innovation
  • Economic contribution
  • Productivity enhancement
  • Global market dynamics
  • Urbanization
  • Workforce demographics
  • Production scale
  • Social implications
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