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he map details changes that occurred in the town of Willington in the years 1780, 1860, and 2000.

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The maps illustrate how Willington
town
 changed in three different areas.
Overall
, its readily apparent that
although
 there is development in the village population and roads ,
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greenery in
town
 vanished by 2000. Over the centuries the flow
of
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remains in
same
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 direction from
north west
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 to south . There are around 100 homes in
town
along with
vast
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 forest area spread on
eastern
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the eastern
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 side . Farms are generally located in
in
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the center
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center
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 of
town
. After 10 decades a bridge was constructed on
river
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 and the new road is connected to the river
that is
 extended towards the east. There is a twofold increase in
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 of houses,
while
 land occupied by far and forests decreased. In 2000, many new shops emerged on the banks of
river
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the river
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 . Wetland land for birds is on the southern edge which is newly developed. The forest area is occupied by a school and there is no sign of farms.There is a road that connects schools and houses. There are around 500 houses.
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