The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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essay will explain the details of my views.
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people
will be attracted to jobs with higher Use synonyms
payroll
, especially in the wake of Fix the agreement mistake
payrolls
rising
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the rising
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mean
people
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life
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such
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a vacation
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, in turn,
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and bring happiness not just to that person, but Use synonyms
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To sum up
, I certainly believe that both salary scale and Linking Words
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pursue
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite