The chart shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the levels of a school in Australia in 1999 in different categories and demonstrates the percentage of gender in each feature.
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that three of the five features have a percentage of males
higher than females
while
the remains experienced a downward trend. Another striking factor is that the skilled vocational Diploma
has the biggest gap between the 2 genders.
To begin
with, the Master's Degree had the figures at 60% for males
and 40% for females
. Moreover
, Skilled Vocational Diploma
data was 90% for males
which is 2 times higher than the figure for males
with Bachelor’s Degree. When it comes to the figures for females
, the proportion for Vocational skills was 10% whereas
it is 5 times higher when compared to Bachelor’s Degree.
One prominent of this
data is that the percentage of males
in the Postgraduate Diploma
was the same as the data of females
at 70% and 2 times higher than the figure of males
in the Undergraduate Diploma
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