The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given bar charts present the genres of
music
albums bought by Use synonyms
music
fans in Britain based on how old they are and what are they genders. Use synonyms
Overall
, the number of purchased albums in every kind of Linking Words
music
is dominated by the man. Use synonyms
While
the amount of purchasing in the women Linking Words
always
lower.
It is clear from the Pop Add a missing verb
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graph that the highest percentage of customers come from a group of 25-34 years old that reach more than 30%, followed by the 16-24 with 30% and the 35-44 around 25%. Use synonyms
In addition
, only 10% of the buyers come from 45s. Linking Words
Furthermore
, an almost similar number Linking Words
also
occurs in the genre of Rock Linking Words
Music
.
Meanwhile, in Classic Use synonyms
Music
, most of the buyers came from 45+ years old, and the groups of 16-24 only purchased less than 5% of albums. Use synonyms
Moreover
the group of 25-34 decreases by around 16%. It Linking Words
also
happens to the group of 35-44, which drops their bar to around 3%.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words music with synonyms.
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