The pie charts show the destination of export goods in three countries in 2010.

The pie charts show the destination of export goods in three countries in 2010.
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The pie charts illustrate
export
designated
countries
of three different nations, namely
Argentina
,
Mexico
and
Chile
in 2010.
Overall
,
the
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Mexico
’s largest proportion of
export
was to the US. Meanwhile,
Argentina
and
Chile
had
a quite proportional segments
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for each destination
countries
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country
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. Looking at the pictures in more detail, The Unite
State
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States
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of Amerika was by far the majority of
export
destination for
Mexico
in 2010, accounting for almost three-quarters of the total. Meanwhile, for
Argentina
and
Chile
, the Selling goods to the US
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16% and 18% respectively. Other Latin American
countries
were the highest
export
destination for
Argentina
and
Chile
, accounting for 38% and 31% respectively. In stark contrast, In
Mexico
, trade
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other Latin America,
representing
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only 6% of the Total
export
. For
Mexico
,
export
to Europe, Other Latin America, and other
countries
collectively made up only 18% of the total value.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words export, countries, argentina, mexico, chile with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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