The Plans Below Show the Layout of a University Sports Centre Now Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plan displays the university's
sports
centre at current and how it is planned to redevelop.
Overall
, there had been a lot of changes in the
sports
centre, with two new changing rooms, a new dance studio, shop and cafe, and a replacement of the leisure
pool
and
sports
hall. The entrance of the centre is in the middle of the southern wall. Upon entering, the reception can be seen directly ahead. Behind the reception is a 25-meter
pool
, which had to change room on the west side and seating on the east side. All the facilities remain unchanged.
However
, the gym north of the
pool
is to be extended east-west, and court seats
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the east of the
pool
are removed and make room for
sports
halls and two new dance studios.
Furthermore
, outdoor counts on the west of the
pool
are replaced by a leisure
pool
. There is
also
build a new changing room on the south of it.
Lastly
, a
sports
shop and safe are to be built southwest and southeast of the reception area respectively.
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