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The line graph illustrates the usage of four different types of proteins in a European nation from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, through the course /of 25 years, chicken witnessed a continuous increase in the consumption rate
while
 beef, lamb and fish all experienced a downward trend. In 1979, chicken commenced at around 150
grams
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consumed per person every week. During the observed period,
this
 poultry showed some fluctuations but, it reached its peak at nearly 250
grams
 for each person per week in 2004. Interestingly,
although
 it started as the second most popular protein option, chicken became the protein
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chosen the most 25 years later.
Beef
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 was the type of meat being eaten the most in 1979, at about 200
grams
.
In contrast
, fish and lamb were recorded at approximately 50 and 150
grams
 respectively. In 2004,
while
 the consumption amount of fish remained unchanged, beef and lamb all witnessed a significant decrease to
similarly
 200 and 70
grams
 sequentially.
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