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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts provide information about the amount of money spent by an English school in three different decades 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall
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, teachers' salaries represented the main spending of the institution during all the periods taken into consideration.
According to
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 the three illustrations, the figures for salaries were approximately 70% of total expenses. More specifically, the teachers' pays percentages were between 45% and 50%,
while
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 the other workers' salary ratio was 28% during 1981, 22% in 1991 and 15% throughout 2001. As illustrated in the charts, the school invested in resources and furniture & equipment around one-fourth of total expenses. In fact, the percentages for those were 30%, 25% and 32% in 1981, 1991 and 2001 respectively. The insurance ratio go up gradually from 2% to 8% and it influenced minimally the total spending.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Annual spending
  • Expenditure categories
  • Allocation
  • Trend analysis
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Budget allocation strategy
  • Inflation-adjusted
  • Future implications
  • Educational institutions
  • Technological resources
  • Maintenance and operations
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fiscal management
  • Resource allocation
  • Strategic planning
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