The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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as illustrated in the first picture,
paradise
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island
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in the past consisted of a lot of things. if clarify, natural spring
which
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was almost in the middle. rocks which
was
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were
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on the opposite side of the beach. there were palms in the middle near the natural spring.
scientitic
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scientific
research station was near the beach. there were
also
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a pier and a boat to travel the sea.
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also
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,also
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paradise
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was occupied by the sea. the second picture gives information on
the
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apply
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paradise
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island
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now and what it consists of. it consists
a
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of a
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lot of features;
for example
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,
cafe
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a cafe
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, hotel complex, open restaurant, cycle path and swimming pool.
open
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the open
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restaurant is in the middle of
this
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island
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.
swimming
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the swimming
a swimming
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pool is near the hotel complex, which is the main part of
this
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island
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. the
island
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is occupied by the sea. there is
also
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a cruise ship for people to travel.
additionally
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, there are rocks around the
island
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overall
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,
paradise
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island
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now consists of more places [to
entartain
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entertain
people ] rather than it was in the past
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words paradise, island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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