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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the conjugal situation of people living in
Canada
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 and Australia.
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it is clear that
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while
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 in
Canada
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 the separated but not divorced proportion is the most popular one, in Australia the married ones gain in popularity. First of all, it can clearly be seen that
Canada
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's population have six different status of marital.
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, the chart shows that more than half of the survey, about 53 per cent to be exact, are separated but not divorced. In second place come the married happily after with a feature of 29%, followed by two equal proportions of 7% which are widowed and those who never got married.
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, the least popular trend there are homosexual marriage and divorce with 3% and 1%, respectively. Now looking at Australia, a different trend is noticed.
Besides
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 only existing five different conjugal statuses, one less than in
Canada
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, contrary to the
last
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 one, the marital position with more adepts with almost half of the total are the married couples.
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 it can be seen that second place goes to those who are separated but not divorced with a total of 41%. The least popular features match the widowed, the single and the divorced with features of 6%, 5% and 2%. When comparing the two countries, the major differences are between those who are married and the others who are separated but not divorced. All the other
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 are very similar among them.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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