The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts give information about
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of nutrition in every meal and they can be unhealthy by
over eating
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.
Overall
,
sodium
and saturated fat stand first.
However
, added sugar and saturated fat rank
last
in
breakfast
while
,
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sodium
is in the same proportion in
snacks
and
breakfast
.
Sodium
ranks first in dinner by 43%.
However
, lunch ranks second largest proportion of
sodium
and it forms just under 30%.
Furthermore
,
sodium
contributes 14% in
snacks
and
breakfast
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respectively. The second pie chart is just under 5% lower
than
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sodium
in dinner.
However
, lunch and
snacks
are the second and third largest proportion and the former is 5% higher than the latter.
Moreover
, the remaining 16% is allocated to
breakfast
. Going forward to added sugar, the contribution of
snacks
is just over 40% and stands first.
Furthermore
, dinner is responsible for just over one-fifth
in
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the chart.
On the other hand
, lunch is just over 4% larger than
breakfast
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore, however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, breakfast, snacks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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