The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts give information about

mean

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the mean

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of nutrition in every meal and they can be unhealthy by

over eating

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Overall

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sodium

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and saturated fat stand first.

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, added sugar and saturated fat rank

last

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breakfast

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sodium

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is in the same proportion in

snacks

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and

breakfast

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Sodium

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ranks first in dinner by 43%.

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, lunch ranks second largest proportion of

sodium

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and it forms just under 30%.

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sodium

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contributes 14% in

snacks

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and

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breakfast

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respectively. The second pie chart is just under 5% lower

than

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sodium

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in dinner.

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, lunch and

snacks

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are the second and third largest proportion and the former is 5% higher than the latter.

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, the remaining 16% is allocated to

breakfast

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. Going forward to added sugar, the contribution of

snacks

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is just over 40% and stands first.

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, dinner is responsible for just over one-fifth

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the chart.

On the other hand

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, lunch is just over 4% larger than

breakfast

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, breakfast, snacks with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

158 words

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