The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetable per day in the uk from 2001 to 2008

The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetable per day in the uk from 2001 to 2008
The bar chart compares
fruit
and vegetable
consumption
with different categories of women, men, and
children
in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
Overall
, it is considerably seen that the five portions of nutritions eaten by women are higher during these 7 years periods, where
children
consumed less
fruit
and vegetables compared to adults. In general, the number of vegetables and fruits doubled from 2001 to 2008. To start with, the amount of
fruit
and vegetables eaten by adults is always higher than that of
children
.
Fruit
and vegetable
consumption
by both women and men was at the top in 2006 with 35% and roughly 27% respectively
whereas
the highest amount of nutrition eaten by
children
reached 27% only in 2007.
On the other hand
, the total amount of
fruit
consumption
slightly decreased after 2006 for adults
whereas
it fluctuated for kids.
Therefore
,
fruit
consumption
was stable between 2001 and 2003 for men and
children
,
however
, started to decrease significantly after 2004 till 2008.
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