The chart below shows the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019.
The given chart illustrates the rate of manufacturing, construction, wholesale, retail, information, and communications by industry in Canada between 2005 and 2019.
Overall
, the highest proportion of business in Canada was in the information and communication industry; meanwhile, construction, wholesale, and retail remained increased. Linking Words
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, manufacturing experience fluctuated.
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To begin
with, the most popular business was information and communications; the proportion was 60%, peaked in 2018 at 75%, and fell to 70% in 2019. Linking Words
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, the number decreased in 2019, but Linking Words
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business remained the highest purchase between 2015 to 2019. Linking Words
Next,
the construction industry in Canada increased every year. In 2015 the number was just under 30%, and in 2019 became 55%. Linking Words
Furthermore
, wholesale started the rate at 40% and climbed up to 60% in 2019. Retail was 32% but dramatically rose in 2016, and the percentage was almost stable between 50% to 60%. Linking Words
Finally
, the proportion of manufacturing experience fluctuated, starting at 30% in 2015 and rising by 15% in 2017 before hitting a peak at 59% in 2019.Linking Words
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