Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Rachel and I am living in

Lexington

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building in An Phu Ward. I am so sorry to hear that you and the local council are considering

to close

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An Phu

sports

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Sports

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and leisure

centre

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. I am writing to you about stopping closing

this

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centre

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because it’s useful to many people including me and my family and friends.

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as my family often go to

this

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centre

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for walking in the evening and

exercising

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exercise

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in the morning

everyday

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Moreover

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this

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place

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connects everyone together

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it’s

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its

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local communication. You know that my family and neighbours make friends together through walking and running

everyday

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every day

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Besides

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, we share some local information and join in some sports

such

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as badminton and chess.

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, my daughter is very excited to come to

this

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place

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to play with other children

instead

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of staying at home watching the television or phone. And my mother likes to dance with

old

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the old

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dancer

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team

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doing

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exercise and

releasing

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release

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daily stresses and

getting

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to know each other. In case, you keep your decision to close

this

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centre

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. There are many people who feel sad and disappointed with you. Because they think that it’s a play yard or second family

everytime

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they need a

place

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for leisure and sport to shake up in their busy life. Specifically, my daughter will feel sad because there is not nearly an outside

place

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to play with friends and join in

sport

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classes. She has to be sick of watching the television and phone. And the neighbours can not connect together through healthy entertainment and sport. I hope you and the local council will think about positive activities and connections in our local area that stop closing the sports and leisure

centre

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. Thank you. Regards

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

302 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

leisure centre
foster social bonds
physical health
mental well-being
constructive activities
accessible
exercise
community spirit
public service
anti-social behavior
cost-saving measures
vital role
recreation
negative impact
forecast

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