The chart shows the proportion of businesses making e-comerce purcheses by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019.
The given chart illustrates the percentage of businesses making e-commerce buys in the industry in Canada from 2015 to 2019.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in four businesses in Canada during the period, except in terms of manufacturing with a fluctuation. Linking Words
However
, the highest proportion was in the business of Information and Communications.
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To begin
with, in Manufacturing, the rate of making e-commerce purchases stood at more than 30% in 2015 and rose significantly to over 50% in 2016. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, in 2017, it declined slightly by almost 10% before going up to about 60% in the Linking Words
last
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Furthermore
, Construction, Wholesale, and Retail experienced gradual growth during the period from 13% to nearly 55%, from 40% to over 60%, and from 32% to 57% respectively.
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Moreover
, Information and Communication was the highest business in providing e-commerce with starting point of over 60% in 2015. Linking Words
Then
, It increased grammatically to 75% before falling down to under 70% in 2019.Linking Words
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