The maps below show how a coastal town developed between 1950 and 2007.
The maps illustrate the development of a town called Coastal from 1950 to 2007.
Overall
, it is clear that
there were many buildings were built and replaced the grassland in the year 2007.
According to
the first map, there was a sea in the north and had
Unnecessary verb
apply
the
road to the south. On the left side of the sea, an industrial area was there and the opposite was the car park. Correct article usage
a
Moreover
, the lands in the south was
covered by grassland.
Moving on to the next map, Change the verb form
were
comparing
to the year 1959, there are significant changes. Starting from the north, Wrong verb form
compared
yacht
marina was created in the sea surrounded by Correct article usage
a yacht
road
with some apartments. The industrial area was developed to be a park, swimming pool, and multi-storey car park. Another noticeable improvement was grassland, demolished and replaced by shops, Correct article usage
a road
cinema
, and various Fix the agreement mistake
cinemas
of
houses.Change preposition
apply
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