The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The shown chart provides information about the amount of spending in the four nations (United States,
Canada
, the United Kingdom, and Japan), split by five basic needs (food, housing, transportation, health care, and clothing) in 2009. Use synonyms
Overall
, people in mentioned countries spent the most on housing, Linking Words
while
the least amount was on health care.
To start with, the highest expenses of people in those nations was in housing, which the United States spent more than the other countries, namely just over a quarter, Linking Words
whereas
the lowest spending was in Linking Words
Canada
at around 20%. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, people Linking Words
also
spent much on food and transportation, where the highest was in the United Kingdom at well over 20% and Linking Words
Canada
at exactly 20%, respectively.
Turning to the remaining categories, the average spending for clothing was only less than 10% with the highest was Use synonyms
Canada
at around 5%. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the expenditure for health care was only less than 5% with the lowest being the United Kingdom, which stood at around 35, Linking Words
while
the highest was the United States, which reached approximately 8%.Linking Words
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