Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

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There is no doubt that being
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a knowledgable
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and well-known person is really crucial. Nowadays it is often argued by people that universities and colleges ought to provide the education of working skills,
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others believe that universities must provide
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own regardless of considering the usefulness of
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to an employer. In my point of view, the main task of educational centres
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university
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, is to teach
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to do better thinking and
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solutions for all types of life problems. I strongly believe in it. First of all, it is evident that
students
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need to know some working skills to be successful in some careers including medicine,
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and teaching
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. You will not be able to achieve the best result unless you pass
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in
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.
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, you can not predict what is going to happen,
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issues are waiting for you in the future life, which can be significantly challenging and graduated people can not
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solve them if they did not teach them perfectly.
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, after finishing
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,
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change their thinking about the profession they selected for several reasons and attend to a different career.
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, my husband has graduated
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, but
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he is working in law. In conclusion,
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would like to say that
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prepare people for jobs but
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give more attention to other things in general, because
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are not
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stable
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at choosing
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • theoretical knowledge
  • critical thinking skills
  • specialized expertise
  • on-the-job training
  • work experience
  • financial independence
  • career growth
  • hands-on experience
  • balanced perspective
  • internships
  • part-time work
  • academic learning
  • vocational training
  • apprenticeships
  • personal circumstances
  • financial constraints
  • career goals
  • individual aptitudes
  • well-paying careers
  • satisfying careers
  • specialized training
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