The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate an industrial region in Norbiton in the present time compared with an intended layout of developing the place in some years to come.
Overall
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, it is evident that there will be tremendous changes in infrastructure that will be affected by the future plan. To commence with, in the current plan, there is a river running at the northern border of the layout, and beyond it is farmland.
However
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, no bridge aiding workers to cross the river to the other side. Interestingly, in the future plan, a bridge connects the central part of the town and beyond the river to the farmland.
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, the central part of the town is mostly dominated by factories which stretch to the eastern corner, but in some years to come, it is planned that most of the factory buildings will be replaced with housing units.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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