The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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the percentage of time working adults spend on different activities in a particular country between 1958 and 2008.The adults spend their time

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these activities:working,other interests or playing sports,going out(with friends or families),

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to work,sleeping and relaxing at home.

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adults spent more time

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working and sleeping

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two years(working in 1958 was 33

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,in 2008 was 42

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and sleeping in 1958 was 32%,in 2008 was 25

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each

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was increased and decreased from 1958 to 2008. The pie charts show that

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other interests or playing sports,working,relaxing at home and

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to work

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raised(other

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from 6 to 8%,working from 33% to 42%,relaxing at home from 8% to 13

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and travel to work from 2% to 8

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sleeping and going out

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decreased(sleeping from 32 to 25

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and going out from 19 to 6%) between 1958 and year of 2008.

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of them increased dramatically.