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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

#students #science #subjects #university #countries #effects #society
There are many pupils who
are choose
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humanities
instead
 of
science
 subjects in university in many countries nowadays.The reasons
of
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this
problem
maybe
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may be
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 so much,
may be
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maybe
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study
 programs are hard in universities or
new
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the new
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 generation prefer
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humanities
 because
of
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they do not like
science
.I think that
,
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It is
problem
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a problem
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 for society. The
students
 who
are not choose
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do not choose
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 scientific subjects
,
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apply
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will be
problem
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a problem
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 for society.Because,of
course
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humanities
 are valuable,the
students
 when graduate
the
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humanities
,they can work
in
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barrister
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,police or in any other job.
However
science
 mean
is
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engineer,doctor,
architect
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 and so many different and
essencial
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essential
 job.
For instance
:nowadays there
are
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 so many global
problem
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problems
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 in the world and one of
this
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these problems
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problem
 is
energy
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the energy
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problem
.The Earth need
to
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new alternative energy resource and what do you think?Can lawyers,
pilice
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pilots
 and others solve
this
problem
?Of course not.That's why In my point of view for today,
pupil
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pupils
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 have to
study
science
. At the same time in my point of view,the one reason
of
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the student choose
humanities
istead
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instead
 of
science
,
may be
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maybe
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students
 dislike mathematics,physics and chemistry.As an example:the searching show that,there are
people
 who are not like math in Europe and majority of
people
 does not like math in France.I think the teacher can find a new way to make
people
 love
this
 subject.
Thus
,the
people
 who like
science
 will increase in society and
also
 engineers,doctors and others will raise. In conclude,to my mind the reason of
people
 choose
humanities
instead
 of
science
 subjects is
study
 programs and teachers.The
study
 programs can be easy and teachers have to motivate their
students
 for growing the
people
 who love the
science
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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